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The End!
Whew...I can't believe I finished this. See? I told you all you would love the ending! Thank you guys so much for reading this series. Its been a lot of fun writing this and I am so ready to start a new series. In fact I'm going to post a new one right after this one so keep reading my stuff!
Anyhoo thanks again guys and be sure to read my journal that will accompany this chapter.
:iconpirateukplz: <---- :eyes:

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xxxendergirlxxx Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing! I love it so much, I just, I'm speechless.... You should really make another book about their life and getting used to all this new stuff, when you're done with Beauty and the Beast of course!
LisaRohan Featured By Owner Edited Aug 31, 2014
This is the best story I've ever read! I had to made myself do my homework, because I wanted to read it. I wanted to know how it finished. Now I know...... And I can only say this:
AWESOME!!!!! Best story ever of Pirate!England!
OTAKUIN23 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
One of the best stories I ever read it was so worth threatening my big bro just to read this hahahaha!~
PetraRavioli Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OhMyGod, I'm so glad I read this! It was one of the best well written inserts and just story in general that I've ever read on DeviantArt, ever! I cant think of a chapter that didn't make me break down in tears or have me laughing hysterically. The entirety of the chapter before this all I could do was cry and tell myself "No he's not really dead, your going to see him at the mall and he'll be all like 'Nah I'm a country so ill never die' yay happy ending" I also plan on starting the next series right away cause this was so Gilbe- I mean, Awesome!
gingersnap48 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Good loard I love it I wouldn't go out of my room for 8 hours just so I could Finish this with out distraction beautiful * wipes tear from eye *
saraiah26 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
I'm going to repeat what so many others have commented and say that this truly is one of the best fanfics I've read, period. 1) it wasn't too short, so there was ample time for plot/character development, both of which were very well done. 2) you created a very original story, yet made the pre-existing characters feel true to their origins - a real challenge. 3) you actually FINISHED it, which increases the awesomeness by at least 50%. (Unfinished fanfiction is the scourge of the internet.)

Bottom line: please, please keep it up. I and your many other fans will be anxiously waiting to read anything else you write. :) Brava!!
XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*clapclapclapclapclap* It was really sad at the end of the last chapter, but then when Reader-Chan read online about Arthur I was like, 'Holy cow he totally came to the future' and then when she went to Alfred's house I thought, 'Shit's goin' down' and the ending was really funny too! Basically, I enjoyed the story :3
AtemxyugiKFxjinx Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Just literally spent over 48 hrs on reading this alone. No breaks as n reading this while eating, dressing, bathroom, not even a single wink of sleep.....whatsoever. God I'm tired! But I wanna read this out of the world novel, AGAIN!!!!!!
I've also read some of the comments below and saw wat AsukaVoltaire had mentioned. Printing this hot puppy out? I'LL DO THAT! Keep doing more!!!
By the way, wondering here, do u take requests? Lik wat character u could write??? 
Dracosara Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hands down, this is the most developed and thought out story I've read so far on DeviantArt. Most of the times, I don't easily get interested with stories of this sort, but I was intrigued at the beginning and decided to read a bit more. I got hooked on it. I think I spent a solid 24 hours reading it with only a 6 hour break to sleep. Now I'm not much of a person to stay up at night, but I couldn't help it. Honestly, it shows that you were into this story when writing it. Even I could feel it. I'm not one to get emotional over anything. I never cry over films, stories, death of family members, or even when I got an "F no" when I asked out my only real-world crush I ever had. I don't get attached or fall in love with anyone easily, especially not characters of a story. You managed to get to me though. I felt emotion all the way through. ....I may have gotten a bit emotional on these last two chapters. I'm not suggesting that I was crying or anything, though. It's a possibility... But it doesn't mean it happened. Anyways, you did an amazing job developing the story. I remember multiple times when I would think, "I think the author forgot about this." You never did; it always came up later.

The story made me laugh. It made me cry, but in a dignified fashion of course. Just a a few silent tears, really. Anyways, it shocked me once (which never happens! I never get shocked by anything in a story! What shocked me more is that you shocked me.). It made my heart race. It made me smile sincerely (something I haven't done in years). Basically, you portrayed emotion in your story, and you portrayed it well. What I wanted to tell you most though in this comment is that I was completely amazed by how well you put the story together. This story was completely developed throughout. There were never any time skips like most stories on DeviantArt (well, there was one, but it was after the climax of the story so it was appropriate and completely acceptable in my eyes). The plot was thought out and I was never confused about what happened during any point. 

I want to read the story again, and I don't know why. I didn't want this story to end, but I feel that a sequel will ruin the story. I like how it ended, but I don't like that it did end. I've never had so many mixed feelings about a story. I am getting a fluttering feeling in my stomach thinking about what happened in the story, and it's making me want to read it again. The story just makes me want to sit back, think, and contemplate life, but it also encourages me to get up and do something productive. It makes me want to read more stories on DeviantArt to see if anyone else has written a story as well as you, but it also makes me want to write a story myself. I'm sure this is boring you quite a bit, but I want to spit out everything on my mind. And to be honest, I think I am actually craving to read another story from you. Something like this. I will be sure to watch you.

You are an amazing author. Don't stop writing! 
torilily Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Soooooooooooooooooo AWESOME
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