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The End!
Whew...I can't believe I finished this. See? I told you all you would love the ending! Thank you guys so much for reading this series. Its been a lot of fun writing this and I am so ready to start a new series. In fact I'm going to post a new one right after this one so keep reading my stuff!
Anyhoo thanks again guys and be sure to read my journal that will accompany this chapter.
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sis554 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Bravo. I have read Beauty and the Beast uptodate, and just read this one. Must I say, I look forward to the end of Beauty and the Beast. I was in tears in this one, mostly towards the end. My friend showed me Beauty and the Beast and I saw that you had another so I looked at it and got my friend to read Beauty and the Beast. I absolutely adore your writing skills and the ending was beautiful. I am now in love with Pirate Arthur as he is told in your story. I also love how you include random details showing other Hetalia countries in present day and in the past. It was a joy to read, as was Beauty and the Beast.

Waiting for Beauty and the Beast's ending - S. N. C.
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw! Thank you for this well thought out comment. I always adore receiving comments like this. This is why I write, to make people happy and enjoy themselves and I'm glad I succeeded with you. I'm just waiting for my editor to read chapter 47 so I can post it. Please let me know what you think of it once I do.
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Canada98 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is absolutely fantastically well done!! This is one of the greatest hetalia x reader fanfics I've ever read!!
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I feel like I should clean up the wording (some parts seem a little choppy now that I re-read it) But thank you just the same
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Canada98 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
your welcome!!
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Chibilily66 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student Artist
I have never read a story so amazing in my whole life, you are extremely talented and have a creative mind. This is my favorite book of all time and always will be. Now let's go read it again! X3
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Aw! Thank you so much! This was one of the first stories I every wrote on my own so it makes me happy to see so many people enjoying my work. Hope you enjoy reading it again!
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xxxendergirlxxx Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing! I love it so much, I just, I'm speechless.... You should really make another book about their life and getting used to all this new stuff, when you're done with Beauty and the Beast of course!
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You know, someone has mentioned that to me. Maybe if I come up with enough ideas I might.
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LisaRohan Featured By Owner Edited Aug 31, 2014
This is the best story I've ever read! I had to made myself do my homework, because I wanted to read it. I wanted to know how it finished. Now I know...... And I can only say this:
AWESOME!!!!! Best story ever of Pirate!England!
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Thanks!
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OTAKUIN23 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
One of the best stories I ever read it was so worth threatening my big bro just to read this hahahaha!~
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Threatening your big bro???
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OTAKUIN23 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah Nii-san blocking me of the internet! So I told if he doesn't stop it I'll pull off his internet! That's my way of saying he can't play online games with me having the main router in my room!
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha! Take that bro!
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OTAKUIN23 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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PetraRavioli Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OhMyGod, I'm so glad I read this! It was one of the best well written inserts and just story in general that I've ever read on DeviantArt, ever! I cant think of a chapter that didn't make me break down in tears or have me laughing hysterically. The entirety of the chapter before this all I could do was cry and tell myself "No he's not really dead, your going to see him at the mall and he'll be all like 'Nah I'm a country so ill never die' yay happy ending" I also plan on starting the next series right away cause this was so Gilbe- I mean, Awesome!
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD He's all like "BAM! IMMA COUNT-RAY AND I CAIN'T DAI!! I used incorrect spelling because I know how much Aurthur hates it.
Aurthur: Oh for heavens sake your spelling is atrocious!
Me: Meh, DEAL WITH IT! :iconheplz:
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gingersnap48 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Good loard I love it I wouldn't go out of my room for 8 hours just so I could Finish this with out distraction beautiful * wipes tear from eye *
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gingersnap48 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014
No,no thank YOU!!
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
X) Thanks~!
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saraiah26 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
I'm going to repeat what so many others have commented and say that this truly is one of the best fanfics I've read, period. 1) it wasn't too short, so there was ample time for plot/character development, both of which were very well done. 2) you created a very original story, yet made the pre-existing characters feel true to their origins - a real challenge. 3) you actually FINISHED it, which increases the awesomeness by at least 50%. (Unfinished fanfiction is the scourge of the internet.)

Bottom line: please, please keep it up. I and your many other fans will be anxiously waiting to read anything else you write. :) Brava!!
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XxCandy-LoverxX Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*clapclapclapclapclap* It was really sad at the end of the last chapter, but then when Reader-Chan read online about Arthur I was like, 'Holy cow he totally came to the future' and then when she went to Alfred's house I thought, 'Shit's goin' down' and the ending was really funny too! Basically, I enjoyed the story :3
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AtemxyugiKFxjinx Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Just literally spent over 48 hrs on reading this alone. No breaks as n reading this while eating, dressing, bathroom, not even a single wink of sleep.....whatsoever. God I'm tired! But I wanna read this out of the world novel, AGAIN!!!!!!
I've also read some of the comments below and saw wat AsukaVoltaire had mentioned. Printing this hot puppy out? I'LL DO THAT! Keep doing more!!!
By the way, wondering here, do u take requests? Lik wat character u could write??? 
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Dracosara Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hands down, this is the most developed and thought out story I've read so far on DeviantArt. Most of the times, I don't easily get interested with stories of this sort, but I was intrigued at the beginning and decided to read a bit more. I got hooked on it. I think I spent a solid 24 hours reading it with only a 6 hour break to sleep. Now I'm not much of a person to stay up at night, but I couldn't help it. Honestly, it shows that you were into this story when writing it. Even I could feel it. I'm not one to get emotional over anything. I never cry over films, stories, death of family members, or even when I got an "F no" when I asked out my only real-world crush I ever had. I don't get attached or fall in love with anyone easily, especially not characters of a story. You managed to get to me though. I felt emotion all the way through. ....I may have gotten a bit emotional on these last two chapters. I'm not suggesting that I was crying or anything, though. It's a possibility... But it doesn't mean it happened. Anyways, you did an amazing job developing the story. I remember multiple times when I would think, "I think the author forgot about this." You never did; it always came up later.

The story made me laugh. It made me cry, but in a dignified fashion of course. Just a a few silent tears, really. Anyways, it shocked me once (which never happens! I never get shocked by anything in a story! What shocked me more is that you shocked me.). It made my heart race. It made me smile sincerely (something I haven't done in years). Basically, you portrayed emotion in your story, and you portrayed it well. What I wanted to tell you most though in this comment is that I was completely amazed by how well you put the story together. This story was completely developed throughout. There were never any time skips like most stories on DeviantArt (well, there was one, but it was after the climax of the story so it was appropriate and completely acceptable in my eyes). The plot was thought out and I was never confused about what happened during any point. 

I want to read the story again, and I don't know why. I didn't want this story to end, but I feel that a sequel will ruin the story. I like how it ended, but I don't like that it did end. I've never had so many mixed feelings about a story. I am getting a fluttering feeling in my stomach thinking about what happened in the story, and it's making me want to read it again. The story just makes me want to sit back, think, and contemplate life, but it also encourages me to get up and do something productive. It makes me want to read more stories on DeviantArt to see if anyone else has written a story as well as you, but it also makes me want to write a story myself. I'm sure this is boring you quite a bit, but I want to spit out everything on my mind. And to be honest, I think I am actually craving to read another story from you. Something like this. I will be sure to watch you.

You are an amazing author. Don't stop writing! 
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torilily Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Soooooooooooooooooo AWESOME
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AsukaVoltaire Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I just noticed that there's 364 comments on this, im going to make it 365 to match your user name because my slight ocd tells me so.
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AoiDias Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Awwww! I'm so happy that Arthur and Peter were able to come! Alfred you big sweetie!!! I REALLY loved this story. Part of me is sad its over. T-T I had a lot of fun reading this. This really is my favorite fanfic right now.  <3
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AsukaVoltaire Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This is now, my all time favorite anything on deviant art. I have the urge to print it out on paper and carry it with me every where i go, just so i can read it like a million times a day.
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
X) You like it that much?
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AsukaVoltaire Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You have no idea. I just cant explain my love for this story.
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
X) How about with dance? :iconrussiarasputinplz:
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AsukaVoltaire Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Haha, Maybe, but the only dance i know is ball room dancing...
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askfemjapan13 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*le gasp* To be honest, I really was expecting a bitter-sweet ending SOME way form or shape... I swear, the previous chapter gave my feels a heart attack! But you kept it fluffy and aaaaaaaahhhhh~!!! This has satisfied my not-so-inner-fangirl so much! I could probably go the rest if the month without reading another fanfiction!... But I'm probably not gonna... Besides, sometimes I read them just to laugh at them. Which reminds me: I loved that little bit of comic relief at the end! Honestly… I don't even understand why guys think that letting their pants say makes them look cool; I mean, - in my mind, - I'm just like, "Dude... No girl wants to go on a date with you see your boxers or anything like that just hangin' outta your pants. Buy a belt or something." Okay I'm done now.:iconawwplz:
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL to be honest, the fluff was really REALLY hard for me to write. I get all wigged out from it XD And I know! Sagging pants are so stupid! Did you know that look originated in jail? When prisoners  wore their pants sagging like that it meant that they were open for...ahem, sleeping around. IfyaknowwhatImean.
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Yukatono1 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014   Traditional Artist
You my dear have a way of making life seem more intresting than it already is. You make me laugh. And I thank you for it. I love this story and I also love your Russia x reader story. Keep it up!!!! 
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AW! Thanks! Glad I can brighten your life up a bit :)
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quiet-daisy Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
I fell in love with this story. :iconluvluvplz:
I'm currently reading your Russia x Reader story, and I just wanted to say that I love the way you write. I always feel so immersed, and I hope that one day I can be as talanted a writer as you.
If you don't mind me asking; how do you do it? Any tips?
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw! Thanks! I'm glad you like my style of writing so much! And as for tips....um, I guess be as detailed as you can be but don't use too many of the same words in the same paragraph or sentence if possible. Like if you're going to describe how the character is sad, use other word's to describe it as well like anguished, grieved, depressed, etc. It makes it sound better that way :) Other than that the only other thing I recommend is have fun with it. Never write when you're not in the mood, otherwise it will turn out like crap and no one wants that :)
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist
Al ya big balooga c'mere :hug:
And dat ending :icondatassplz:
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Dat icon!
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh...I still cry a little when I reread it. Q.Q So pretty...
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
X) Haven't heard from you in a while. How have you been?
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've been good~ And yeah >.< My computer broke down so I've been out of commission for a while. BUT I AM BACK!! XD And you~?
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Busy!....as you can tell from my LATE RESPONSE. =_= I need a vacation XD
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh! Well, vacations are good! Find one and take one! But late responses are okay~
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Nizhonii Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohmygod. Dead... you killed me with your awesomnessI think I've fainted. This is one of the most incredible, well thought out, detiled, un-rushed fanfics that I have ever read and it's amazing.... just thought you should know :wink
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AW! Thanks!
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Warriorcatgrl99 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014   General Artist
As soon as it said that Arthur mysteriously disappearedI knew Alfred brought him in
I had to try hard not to squeal
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OrangeSplash365 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD You clever little-!
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